A writing journal: notes on drafting, revising and keeping a notebook

Posted May 27, 2026 at 06:48

Writing when the day is already full

Subject: Drafting

The scarce resource is usually not time. Most people who cannot find time to write can find forty minutes; what they cannot find is forty useful minutes, because the first twenty are spent rereading, remembering the intention, and working out where the sentence was going. Re-entry is the real cost, and it is charged at every session regardless of how long the session lasts.

That changes what to optimise. Rather than trying to assemble longer blocks, which mostly fails against a full week, engineer the re-entry cost down until a short session is worth starting. This is a mechanical problem with mechanical fixes.

Stop mid-sentence

The oldest of these fixes, and still the best: end the session in the middle of a sentence you already know how to finish. Not at the end of a section, which feels tidy and leaves you facing a blank next morning, but part-way through a line whose ending is already in your head.

The gain is that the first act of the next session is completion rather than invention. You finish the sentence in ten seconds, and you are writing. Starting cold, the same ten seconds are spent staring at a clean paragraph break, which is where most short sessions die.

Leave a next-action line

Under the stopping point, write one plain line stating what the next piece of writing has to do. Not a heading, not a plan. A working instruction: get the reader from the meeting to the letter without narrating the drive. Explain why the second example is not a repeat of the first. Cut the opening two paragraphs and start at the description.

It should be readable in five seconds and specific enough to act on without judgement. The difference between a next-action line and a note saying continue here is the whole benefit.

Keep the reference material out of the session

A short session cannot absorb a research detour. If the sentence needs a date, a name or a check, write it in brackets and keep moving. Collect all the brackets into a single low-attention task and clear them in a batch, in the sort of tired half-hour that is no good for composition anyway.

This also protects the draft from a subtler failure. Looking something up mid-sentence tends to import the source's framing along with its fact, and the paragraph quietly becomes a summary of what you just read rather than the thing you were writing.

Decide the night before, not in the morning

Deciding what to work on is a separate task from working, and it is the one that consumes a short session most reliably. Make the decision at the end of the previous session or the night before, write it down, and treat it as settled. Ten minutes spent choosing between two pieces is a quarter of the session, and the choice made under time pressure is usually the easier piece rather than the live one.

What a short session cannot do

Be realistic about the limits, because expecting the wrong output from twenty minutes is a good way to conclude that short sessions do not work. They are excellent for drafting forward from a known position, for line revision, and for clearing bracketed gaps. They are poor for structural work, which needs the whole piece held in mind at once, and poor for the first survey pass of anything new.

So do the structural passes when a longer block genuinely appears, perhaps twice a month, and use the short sessions for everything else. A piece can be almost entirely written in twenty-minute units, provided the two or three decisions that require the long view are made in the sessions that can hold it.

Posted May 27, 2026 at 06:48 · Subject: Drafting · Permalink